TooBusyInSpace



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    Jake was tired; it was always the same, it was always Lo'ak.

    ​In a brutal fight, his son tries to leave in the middle of the argument. Rage consumes him, and blinded by fury, cruel words escape Jake's lips.

    ​"If you walk out that entrance... don't come back."

    ​Everything seemed to stop at that moment.

    ​Tears roll down his son's face. Lo'ak, devastated, walks away.

    ​And Jake's life falls apart.

    ​If Jake had known, if he had known that everything would end like this... he never would have let his son walk out that entrance.

    ​He never would have opened his mouth to begin with.

    ​Now Jake must face the horror of his words.

    ​Words that might be the last thing his son remembers of him.

    ​If only he had truly seen Lo'ak... if only love had arrived before pride...

    ​His son would be here with him.

    ​But Jake does not lose faith that one day he will find him.

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    26 Aug 2026

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    chap 5